掌握常见的10种错误为你的托福写作提分

掌握常见的 10 种错误为你的托福写作提分 1、不一致(Disagreements)Disagreements) 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致及 代词不一致等。 例 1. When one have money , he can do what he want to.When When one have money , he can do what he want to.one When one have money , he can do what he want to.have When one have money , he can do what he want to.money When one have money , he can do what he want to., When one have money , he can do what he want to.he When one have money , he can do what he want to.can When one have money , he can do what he want to.do When one have money , he can do what he want to.what When one have money , he can do what he want to.he When one have money , he can do what he want to.want When one have money , he can do what he want to.to. 人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么。 剖析：one 是单数第三人称，因而本句的 have 应改为 has; When one have money , he can do what he want to.同理，want 应改为 wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。 改为：Once When one have money , he can do what he want to.one When one have money , he can do what he want to.has When one have money , he can do what he want to.money When one have money , he can do what he want to., When one have money , he can do what he want to.he When one have money , he can do what he want to.can When one have money , he can do what he want to.do When one have money , he can do what he want to.what When one have money , he can do what he want to.he When one have money , he can do what he want to.wants When one have money , he can do what he want to.(Disagreements)to When one have money , he can do what he want to.do) 2、修饰语错位(Disagreements)Misplaced When one have money , he can do what he want to.Modifiers) 英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能 引起变化。对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必 要的误解。 例 1 、 I When one have money , he can do what he want to. believe When one have money , he can do what he want to. I When one have money , he can do what he want to. can When one have money , he can do what he want to. do When one have money , he can do what he want to. it When one have money , he can do what he want to. well When one have money , he can do what he want to. and When one have money , he can do what he want to. I When one have money , he can do what he want to. will When one have money , he can do what he want to. better When one have money , he can do what he want to. know When one have money , he can do what he want to. the When one have money , he can do what he want to. world outside When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.campus. 剖析：better 位置不当，应置于句末。 3、句子不完整(Disagreements)Sentence When one have money , he can do what he want to.Fragments) 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以 被理解。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情 况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生。 例 1、There When one have money , he can do what he want to. are When one have money , he can do what he want to. many When one have money , he can do what he want to. ways When one have money , he can do what he want to. to When one have money , he can do what he want to. know When one have money , he can do what he want to. the When one have money , he can do what he want to. society. When one have money , he can do what he want to. For When one have money , he can do what he want to. example When one have money , he can do what he want to. by When one have money , he can do what he want to. TV, radio, When one have money , he can do what he want to.newspaper When one have money , he can do what he want to.and When one have money , he can do what he want to.so When one have money , he can do what he want to.on. 剖 析： 本句 后半 部分 “ for When one have money , he can do what he want to. example When one have money , he can do what he want to. by When one have money , he can do what he want to. TV, When one have money , he can do what he want to. radio When one have money , he can do what he want to. , When one have money , he can do what he want to. newspaper When one have money , he can do what he want to. and When one have money , he can do what he want to. so on When one have money , he can do what he want to..”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 改 为 ： There When one have money , he can do what he want to. are When one have money , he can do what he want to. many When one have money , he can do what he want to. ways When one have money , he can do what he want to. to When one have money , he can do what he want to. know When one have money , he can do what he want to. society, When one have money , he can do what he want to. for When one have money , he can do what he want to. example, When one have money , he can do what he want to. by When one have money , he can do what he want to. TV, radio, When one have money , he can do what he want to.and When one have money , he can do what he want to.newspaper. 4、悬垂修饰语(Disagreements)Dangling When one have money , he can do what he want to.Modifiers) 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。 例如：At When one have money , he can do what he want to. the When one have money , he can do what he want to. age When one have money , he can do what he want to. of When one have money , he can do what he want to. ten, When one have money , he can do what he want to. my When one have money , he can do what he want to. grandfather When one have money , he can do what he want to. died. When one have money , he can do what he want to. 这句中“at When one have money , he can do what he want to. the When one have money , he can do what he want to. age When one have money , he can do what he want to. of ten”只点出十岁时，但没有说明“ 谁”十岁时。按一般推理不可能是 my grandfather，如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了。 改为：When When one have money , he can do what he want to.I When one have money , he can do what he want to.was When one have money , he can do what he want to.ten, When one have money , he can do what he want to.my When one have money , he can do what he want to.grandfather When one have money , he can do what he want to.died. 例 1、To When one have money , he can do what he want to.do When one have money , he can do what he want to.well When one have money , he can do what he want to.in When one have money , he can do what he want to.college, When one have money , he can do what he want to.good When one have money , he can do what he want to.grades When one have money , he can do what he want to.are When one have money , he can do what he want to.essential. 剖析：句中不定式短语 “to When one have money , he can do what he want to.do When one have money , he can do what he want to.well When one have money , he can do what he want to.in When one have money , he can do what he want to.college” When one have money , he can do what he want to.的逻辑主语不清楚。 改为：To When one have money , he can do what he want to.do When one have money , he can do what he want to.well When one have money , he can do what he want to.in When one have money , he can do what he want to.college, When one have money , he can do what he want to.a When one have money , he can do what he want to.student When one have money , he can do what he want to.needs When one have money , he can do what he want to.good When one have money , he can do what he want to.grades. 5、词性误用(Disagreements)Misuse When one have money , he can do what he want to.of When one have money , he can do what he want to.Parts When one have money , he can do what he want to.of When one have money , he can do what he want to.Speech) “词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。 例 1、None When one have money , he can do what he want to.can When one have money , he can do what he want to.negative When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.importance When one have money , he can do what he want to.of When one have money , he can do what he want to.money. 剖析：negative When one have money , he can do what he want to.系形容词，误作动词。 改为：None When one have money , he can do what he want to.can When one have money , he can do what he want to.deny When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.importance When one have money , he can do what he want to.of When one have money , he can do what he want to.money. 6、指代不清(Disagreements)Ambiguous When one have money , he can do what he want to.Reference When one have money , he can do what he want to.of When one have money , he can do what he want to.Pronouns) 指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的 代词不一致。试看下面这一句： Mary When one have money , he can do what he want to. was When one have money , he can do what he want to. friendly When one have money , he can do what he want to. to When one have money , he can do what he want to. my When one have money , he can do what he want to. sister When one have money , he can do what he want to. because When one have money , he can do what he want to. she When one have money , he can do what he want to. wanted When one have money , he can do what he want to. her When one have money , he can do what he want to. to When one have money , he can do what he want to. be When one have money , he can do what he want to. her bridesmaid. 玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。 读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当 伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了 然了。这个句子可改为： Mary When one have money , he can do what he want to. was When one have money , he can do what he want to. friendly When one have money , he can do what he want to. to When one have money , he can do what he want to. my When one have money , he can do what he want to. sister When one have money , he can do what he want to. because When one have money , he can do what he want to. she When one have money , he can do what he want to. wanted When one have money , he can do what he want to. my When one have money , he can do what he want to. sister When one have money , he can do what he want to. to When one have money , he can do what he want to. be her When one have money , he can do what he want to.bridesmaid. 例 1、And When one have money , he can do what he want to.we When one have money , he can do what he want to.can When one have money , he can do what he want to.also When one have money , he can do what he want to.know When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.society When one have money , he can do what he want to.by When one have money , he can do what he want to.serving When one have money , he can do what he want to.it When one have money , he can do what he want to.yourself. 剖析：句中人称代词 we When one have money , he can do what he want to.和反身代词 yourself 指代不一致。 改为：We When one have money , he can do what he want to.can When one have money , he can do what he want to.also When one have money , he can do what he want to.know When one have money , he can do what he want to.society When one have money , he can do what he want to.by When one have money , he can do what he want to.serving When one have money , he can do what he want to.it When one have money , he can do what he want to.ourselves. 7、不间断句子(Disagreements)Run-on When one have money , he can do what he want to.Sentences) 什么叫 run-on When one have money , he can do what he want to.sentence? When one have money , he can do what he want to.请看下面的例句。 例 1. When one have money , he can do what he want to.There When one have money , he can do what he want to.are When one have money , he can do what he want to.many When one have money , he can do what he want to.ways When one have money , he can do what he want to.we When one have money , he can do what he want to.get When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.know When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.outside When one have money , he can do what he want to.world. 剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：“There When one have money , he can do what he want to.are When one have money , he can do what he want to.many When one have money , he can do what he want to.ways。” 以 及“We When one have money , he can do what he want to.get When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.know When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.outside When one have money , he can do what he want to.world。”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当 了。 改为：There When one have money , he can do what he want to.are When one have money , he can do what he want to. many When one have money , he can do what he want to. ways When one have money , he can do what he want to.for When one have money , he can do what he want to. us When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to. learn When one have money , he can do what he want to. about When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.outside When one have money , he can do what he want to. world. 或：There When one have money , he can do what he want to.are When one have money , he can do what he want to.many When one have money , he can do what he want to.ways When one have money , he can do what he want to.through When one have money , he can do what he want to.which When one have money , he can do what he want to.we When one have money , he can do what he want to.can When one have money , he can do what he want to.become When one have money , he can do what he want to.acquainted When one have money , he can do what he want to.with the When one have money , he can do what he want to.outside When one have money , he can do what he want to.world. 8、措词毛病(Disagreements)Troubles When one have money , he can do what he want to.in When one have money , he can do what he want to.Diction) Diction When one have money , he can do what he want to. 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时 间紧迫，教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没 有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文 中用词不当的错误比比皆是。 例 1 、 The When one have money , he can do what he want to. increasing When one have money , he can do what he want to. use When one have money , he can do what he want to. of When one have money , he can do what he want to. chemical When one have money , he can do what he want to. obstacles When one have money , he can do what he want to. in When one have money , he can do what he want to. agriculture When one have money , he can do what he want to. also makes When one have money , he can do what he want to.pollution. 农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。 剖析：显然，考生把 obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作”，“障碍”，“障碍物”误作物”误作 substance“物 质”了。另外“the When one have money , he can do what he want to.increasing When one have money , he can do what he want to.use When one have money , he can do what he want to.(Disagreements)不断增加的使用)” When one have money , he can do what he want to.应改为“abusive When one have money , he can do what he want to.use When one have money , he can do what he want to.(Disagreements)滥 用)”。 改 为 ： The When one have money , he can do what he want to. abusive When one have money , he can do what he want to. use When one have money , he can do what he want to. of When one have money , he can do what he want to. chemical When one have money , he can do what he want to. substances When one have money , he can do what he want to. in When one have money , he can do what he want to. agriculture When one have money , he can do what he want to. also causes/leads When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.pollution. 9、累赘(Disagreements)Redundancy) 言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。 能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如：In When one have money , he can do what he want to.spite When one have money , he can do what he want to.of When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.fact that When one have money , he can do what he want to.he When one have money , he can do what he want to.is When one have money , he can do what he want to.lazy, When one have money , he can do what he want to.I When one have money , he can do what he want to.like When one have money , he can do what he want to.him. 本句的“the When one have money , he can do what he want to.fact When one have money , he can do what he want to.that When one have money , he can do what he want to.he When one have money , he can do what he want to.is When one have money , he can do what he want to.lazy”系同谓语从句，我们按照上述“能用词 组的不用从句” 可以改为：In When one have money , he can do what he want to.spite When one have money , he can do what he want to.of When one have money , he can do what he want to.his When one have money , he can do what he want to.laziness, When one have money , he can do what he want to.I When one have money , he can do what he want to.like When one have money , he can do what he want to.him. 例 1 、 For When one have money , he can do what he want to. the When one have money , he can do what he want to. people When one have money , he can do what he want to. who When one have money , he can do what he want to. are When one have money , he can do what he want to. diligent When one have money , he can do what he want to. and When one have money , he can do what he want to. kind, When one have money , he can do what he want to. money When one have money , he can do what he want to. is When one have money , he can do what he want to. just When one have money , he can do what he want to. the thing When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.be When one have money , he can do what he want to.used When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.buy When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.thing When one have money , he can do what he want to.they When one have money , he can do what he want to.need. 剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。 改为：Diligent, When one have money , he can do what he want to.caring When one have money , he can do what he want to.people When one have money , he can do what he want to.use When one have money , he can do what he want to.money When one have money , he can do what he want to.only When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.buy When one have money , he can do what he want to.what When one have money , he can do what he want to.they When one have money , he can do what he want to.need. 10、不连贯(Disagreements)Incoherence) 不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常 犯的毛病。 例 1. When one have money , he can do what he want to.The When one have money , he can do what he want to.fresh When one have money , he can do what he want to.water, When one have money , he can do what he want to.it When one have money , he can do what he want to.is When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.most When one have money , he can do what he want to.important When one have money , he can do what he want to.things When one have money , he can do what he want to.of When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.earth. 剖析：The When one have money , he can do what he want to.fresh When one have money , he can do what he want to.water When one have money , he can do what he want to. 与逗号后的 it When one have money , he can do what he want to. 不连贯。It When one have money , he can do what he want to. 与 things When one have money , he can do what he want to. 在数方面不 一致。 改为：Fresh When one have money , he can do what he want to.water When one have money , he can do what he want to.is When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.most When one have money , he can do what he want to.important When one have money , he can do what he want to.thing When one have money , he can do what he want to.in When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.world. 以上为大家整理的就是平时在托福写作过程中，最容易出现的一些问题 ， 大家不妨拿出自己写过的文章来比对一下，希望有所收益哦。 托福写作：能提分的常用词语 托福写作中，学会巧用一些能为文章增光添彩的词语是获得高分的技巧 之一，下面小编就为大家整理汇总了 10 个托福写作中最常用的词语，希望 能对各位同学的复习有所启发。 1、Challenge (Disagreements)1)Challenge When one have money , he can do what he want to.sb When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.do When one have money , he can do what he want to.sth When one have money , he can do what he want to..向...挑战，邀请...比赛 They When one have money , he can do what he want to.challenge When one have money , he can do what he want to.us When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.a When one have money , he can do what he want to.swimming When one have money , he can do what he want to.contest. (Disagreements)2)to When one have money , he can do what he want to.give When one have money , he can do what he want to.(Disagreements)accept) When one have money , he can do what he want to.a When one have money , he can do what he want to.challenge When one have money , he can do what he want to.(Disagreements) When one have money , he can do what he want to.接受 ) When one have money , he can do what he want to.挑战 2、Share (Disagreements)1)Share When one have money , he can do what he want to.部分，分 Everybody When one have money , he can do what he want to.ought When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.have When one have money , he can do what he want to.his When one have money , he can do what he want to.proper When one have money , he can do what he want to.share. (Disagreements)2)Share When one have money , he can do what he want to.参与、贡献 I When one have money , he can do what he want to.had When one have money , he can do what he want to.no When one have money , he can do what he want to.share When one have money , he can do what he want to.in When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.mater. (Disagreements)3)Share When one have money , he can do what he want to.(Disagreements)with,between) When one have money , he can do what he want to.分配，共有 They When one have money , he can do what he want to.shared When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.profits When one have money , he can do what he want to.between When one have money , he can do what he want to.them. I When one have money , he can do what he want to.will When one have money , he can do what he want to.share When one have money , he can do what he want to.with When one have money , he can do what he want to.you When one have money , he can do what he want to.in When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.undertaking. 3、Instead (Disagreements)1)instead When one have money , he can do what he want to.代替 If When one have money , he can do what he want to.you When one have money , he can do what he want to.cannot When one have money , he can do what he want to.go,let When one have money , he can do what he want to.him When one have money , he can do what he want to.go When one have money , he can do what he want to.instead. (Disagreements)2)instead When one have money , he can do what he want to.of When one have money , he can do what he want to.代替 I When one have money , he can do what he want to.will When one have money , he can do what he want to.go When one have money , he can do what he want to.instead When one have money , he can do what he want to.of When one have money , he can do what he want to.you. 4、Manage (Disagreements)1)manage When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.do When one have money , he can do what he want to.完成，达成 We When one have money , he can do what he want to.finally When one have money , he can do what he want to.managed When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.get When one have money , he can do what he want to.there When one have money , he can do what he want to.in When one have money , he can do what he want to.time. (Disagreements)2)manage When one have money , he can do what he want to.with When one have money , he can do what he want to.办事，处现事务 We When one have money , he can do what he want to.can't When one have money , he can do what he want to.manage When one have money , he can do what he want to.with When one have money , he can do what he want to.these When one have money , he can do what he want to.poor When one have money , he can do what he want to.tools. 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(Disagreements)2)afford When one have money , he can do what he want to.产生 Reading When one have money , he can do what he want to.affords When one have money , he can do what he want to.pleasure. 6、Rather (Disagreements)1)would When one have money , he can do what he want to.rather When one have money , he can do what he want to.do When one have money , he can do what he want to.宁愿 He When one have money , he can do what he want to.said When one have money , he can do what he want to.he When one have money , he can do what he want to.would When one have money , he can do what he want to.rather When one have money , he can do what he want to.stay When one have money , he can do what he want to.at When one have money , he can do what he want to.home. (Disagreements)2)rather When one have money , he can do what he want to.than When one have money , he can do what he want to.宁愿 I When one have money , he can do what he want to.had When one have money , he can do what he want to.rather When one have money , he can do what he want to.dance When one have money , he can do what he want to.than When one have money , he can do what he want to.eat. 7、Ever (Disagreements)1)ever When one have money , he can do what he want to.曾经 Have When one have money , he can do what he want to.you When one have money , he can do what he want to.ever When one have money , he can do what he want to.been When one have money , he can do what he want to.there? (Disagreements)2)ever When one have money , he can do what he want to.究竟 Why When one have money , he can do what he want to.ever When one have money , he can do what he want to.didn't When one have money , he can do what he want to.you When one have money , he can do what he want to.go. (Disagreements)3)ever When one have money , he can do what he want to.如果 If When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.band(Disagreements)乐队)ever When one have money , he can do what he want to.plays When one have money , he can do what he want to.again,we When one have money , he can do what he want to.will When one have money , he can do what he want to.dance. (Disagreements)4)ever When one have money , he can do what he want to.so=very Thank When one have money , he can do what he want to.you When one have money , he can do what he want to.ever When one have money , he can do what he want to.so When one have money , he can do what he want to.much. 8、Available (Disagreements)1) When one have money , he can do what he want to.available When one have money , he can do what he want to.通用的，有效的 The When one have money , he can do what he want to.season When one have money , he can do what he want to.ticket When one have money , he can do what he want to.is When one have money , he can do what he want to.available When one have money , he can do what he want to.for When one have money , he can do what he want to.three When one have money , he can do what he want to.months. (Disagreements)2)available When one have money , he can do what he want to.可用的，可达到的 9、Else (Disagreements)1)else When one have money , he can do what he want to.此外，别的 Where When one have money , he can do what he want to.else When one have money , he can do what he want to.did When one have money , he can do what he want to.you When one have money , he can do what he want to.go? (Disagreements)2)else When one have money , he can do what he want to.否则，不然 Hurry,else When one have money , he can do what he want to.you'll When one have money , he can do what he want to.be When one have money , he can do what he want to.late. 10、Involve (Disagreements)1)involve When one have money , he can do what he want to.包括 Housekeeping When one have money , he can do what he want to. involves When one have money , he can do what he want to. cooking, When one have money , he can do what he want to. washing When one have money , he can do what he want to. dishes, When one have money , he can do what he want to. sweeping When one have money , he can do what he want to. and cleaning. 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(Disagreements)3)involve When one have money , he can do what he want to.使纠缠，使难得 A When one have money , he can do what he want to.sentence When one have money , he can do what he want to.that When one have money , he can do what he want to.is When one have money , he can do what he want to.involved When one have money , he can do what he want to.is When one have money , he can do what he want to.hard When one have money , he can do what he want to.to When one have money , he can do what he want to.understand. (Disagreements)4)involve When one have money , he can do what he want to.包围 Clouds When one have money , he can do what he want to.involved When one have money , he can do what he want to.the When one have money , he can do what he want to.hilltop.