实例讲解析托福写作中提问式开头的表达方式
请参见下面的例子:
1. There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards the
worship of money. A recent survey showed that X percent of respondents
ranked getting rich as their top priority , compared to X percent only a
few years ago . Why do people fail to realize that wealth does not
necessarily bring happiness ?(提问法)
2. Should parents spare the rod and spoil the child ? Opinions
concerning strict parental discipline vary widely . Some view strict
discipline as nothing more than a form of abuse , while others argue it is
an essential factor for instilling appropriate social behavior .(提问法)
参考过以上的例子,不难发现,用提问的方式,可以再瞬间引起读者的
共鸣,让读者产生继续阅读的兴趣。同时如果在中间段落的构造中也学会使
用一些提问,也会引起读者的共鸣。
托福写作范文:Modern Technology
托福写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握,以及逻辑和结构构架能力 ,
一篇好的托福写作范文能够帮助同学们抓住托福写作的得分点,并能给大家
提供提供高分词汇和句式。下面我们就来看一篇托福写作范文: Modern
Technology。
Does modern technology help students learn more information and
learn it more quickly?
Marvelous as it looks at first sight, modern technology does not help
students learn information at a greater speed and with higher efficiency
in most cases; or it could work towards the opposite direction which led
students to lose their initiative to learn and explore.
First of all, one property of modern technology is latently harmful to
any learning mind – it distracts. One thing we feel about when we are
searching for information online is that the internet, as an outstanding
example of modern technology and even regarded as the innovator of
education, provides us with not only relevant results to make use of, but
also external links to click. More than once I turned on my computer to
check school library for resources, but ended up watching Youtube
videos. In this case, computer as a representative of modern technology
plays a negative role in learning information. We do acquire more
information with the convenient tool, yet most of them are irrelevant and
in the end procrastinating would lower our learning.
Also, students would easily become disoriented in the huge sea of
information. Although modern technology could equip us with easy
access to information, the huge amount of resources would actually leave
us discombobulated. Therefore, it is only we possess information more
quickly rather than we learn it more quickly. An illustrating example is my
experience with a HK digital library which stores almost all the books I
desire. At first I enjoyed downloading them from the database, however,
one month later I ended up with hundreds of books stored in my
hardware yet none of them finished or ever clicked.
Furthermore, modern technology gives students an illusion that
information and real knowledge is easy to learn – just by clicking mouse
or watching videos. But in fact this forms only the first step towards useful
information and effective learning, as learning of any kind requires full
concentration and interactive thinking, which are almost absent in the
pocess of popular e-learning experience.
To summarize, modern technology does not help students learn
more information and learn it more quickly, though it does make access
to information and resources much more easily. The popular e-learning
still lacks the concentration, depth, and interaction that are the hallmark
of traditional ways of educating and learning.
托福写作多背一些范文,可以积累一些素材,像好的短语、词、句等,
灵活运用。
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