全国高考英语满分优秀作文范文(2)

全国高考英语满分作文(安徽卷) 题目： 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专 栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑 Jamie，收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信。信 中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受 到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1.表示理解并给予安慰; 2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意： 1.词数 120 左右; 2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： temper n. 脾气，情绪 Hi Worried， I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment. Yours, Jamie 考点：考察半开放性作文 写作指导： 本文属于半开放性作文，要为你编辑 Jamie 的口吻回复 Worried 的求助 信，他的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。要注意 书信的格式和特殊用词。 要点： 1.很遗憾听说对方有此问题。并解释每个人都可能会遇见这样的问题， 所以不必担心。只有的是要学会控制自己的脾气。 2.提出建议：与信任的人进行交流，告诉别人你的困扰，释放自己的压 力。同时多参加各种户外活动，和朋友多玩球类运动。保持乐观的心态。 对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组 织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可 。 写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给 出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也 要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 【一句多译】 每个人都会有过这样的一段时期，在这时情况都很糟糕，所以你不要太 担心了。 (1)The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. (2)It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. 【参考范文】 Hi Worried, I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips: First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours, Jamie 2017 全国高考英语满分作文(四川卷) 题目：(共 35 分) 假设你是李夏，你的美国笔友 Sam 来信关心你参加高考的情况，请根据 以下要点回信告知。 1. 考试日期与科目; 2. 考试准备情况; 3. 考试时的状态; 4. 对试题的感受; 5. 可能的考试结果。 注意： 1. 词数 120 左右; 2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好; 3. 可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯; 4. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇：college entrance examination 【一】 Dear Sam, Thank you for your concern. Now, I am writing to share with you the experiences in taking the college entrance examination. The exam was due to begin on the morning of the seventh, June. The required subjects in exam are Chinese, English, math, physics, chemistry and biology. In order to get high grades in all subjects, I worked very hard to achieve my goal. Therefore, I had made a full preparation for it. In spite of this, I first felt a little nervous because of some knowledge I was not familiar with. But after a deep breath, I told myself that I could make it and I was able to. After a while, everything went smooth for me. Once again, I regained my confidence, and it worked out well. When I finally went out of the exam spot, I felt relieved and a sense of achievement. So I am confident that I will get my ideal grades. I am glad to receive your letter and thank you again for your concern. And I am waiting for your experiences in study and exam. Wish you a happy day! Yours Li Xia 【二】 Dear Sam, Thank you for your concern. Well, I’m now taking the once-a-year college entrance examination. We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th, on the first day of which Chinese and math will be tested, the second day geography, history, politics and English. Over the past ten months, we have been busy in preparing for this examination. Besides listening to teachers carefully in class, we often work deep into night. Therefore, I believe I can succeed. At first, I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because Chinese and math, I came to realize, were very easy and English is my favorite subject, you know. So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college. Best wishes! Yours, Li Xia