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 As is shown in the above picture, a hacker is selling personal information he has stolen online.

In fact, the rampant illegal online deal has provoked growing concern about web security.

It is widely acknowledged that network security system in China is far from developed. Hacking into unprotected computers, criminals manage to gather and sell others' information such as phone numbers, ID numbers, home addresses, car ownership, and even bank account numbers. In spite of their wrong-doings, hackers frequently escape from punishment by making use of loopholes in laws. So far, web crimes have posed a grave threat to people's privacy. Therefore, they hamper  netizens'  enthusiasm for online transaction, which is supposed to be convenient and efficient. And this problem will certainly hold back the development of the Internet in the long term.

Is there anything we can do to solve the problem? Definitely. Above all, it is essential for the government departments in charge to formulate laws to guarantee security of personal information. In addition, in light of outdated online security infrastructure, an effective fraud prevention system should be set up. Last but not least, netizens are advised to attach more importance to their privacy and be more wary of online crimes.