解放军文职招聘考试微笑俱乐部

  某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”，现向癸未征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。

    注意：

    1. 根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯；

    2. 词数：120左右

    There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible,

    First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.

    In a word, let’s greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day.

    【解析】

    本文为图画式作文，做题的关键是审题，考生要把握如下几点：

    1.文体：说明文。

    2.主体时态：一般现在时。

    3.主体人称：第一人称。

    4.内容要点：①微笑的优点；②想对其微笑的人物（父母）；③对父母微笑的理由；④对

    自己微笑的理由；⑤总结。

    【专家简评】

    本题是一个好的标题作文（05福建卷：My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations）。六年来，福建卷基本上使用的是议论性质的写作文体（04陈说，05、06议论，07、08陈说+议论），09年是一个典型的议论性质的文体。话题也非常好，和安徽卷一样，非常适合中学生表达。但从命题的角度看，写作难度较高，因为本题的控制方法不是采用汉语提纲形式，而是采用图文形式，在语言转换上较安徽卷难。从所给范文看，语言难度不高，但思维难度不低。考生得分不易。