2020湖南专升本网：专升本考试英语优秀作文赏析汇总

专升本考试英语优秀作文赏析汇总
Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Deal with Sub-health.You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:
1)现代社会很多人都处于“亚健康”状态
2)造成“亚健康”的原因
3)应该如何解决“亚健康”问题
【思路点拨】
本文属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析导致该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：指出亚健康问题的普遍性及其影响;分析亚健康出现的原因;说明应该如何解决亚健康问题。
【参考范文】
How to Deal with Sub-health
Nowadays,quite a few people are suffering from sub-health.Indeed,sub-health can result in both physical and mental diseases.Even worse,people who suffer from sub-health are more easily to die prematurely.
There are many factors resulting in sub-health.Among these,the pace of modern life plays a vital role.The fast pace of modern life exerts great pressure on people and pressure is the ultimate cause of sub-health.What’s more,modern people spend too much night time working or entertaining,which seriously affects their health.
Considering the great harm brought by sub-health,I think it is high time that we took effective measures to prevent sub-health.Firstly,people must have enough sleep to ensure that they can regain energy and physical strength.Secondly,people should have a rational diet under the instruction of doctor in order to avoid the diseases caused by malnutrition or super-nutrition.Thirdly,people should regularly do some exercise to keep healthy.To conclude,it is necessary for us to take flexible measures to avoid the threat of sub-health.
Directions:For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Customers Buy Cut-price Products?You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:
1)现在许多人都喜欢买打折商品
2)而另一些人认为越是打折的商品越不能买
3)“我”的看法
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和提纲第2点要求提出两种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：指出人们对待打折商品的两种不同态度:可以买打折商品,不应该买打折商品;对比阐述两种态度各自的理由;表明“我”更倾向于哪种态度，并说明理由。
【参考范文】
Should Customers Buy Cut-price Products?
When asked about whether customers should buy cut-price products,different people will offer different views.Some people like to buy cut-price products since a discount is a great appeal.However,others maintain that it’s not a wise and rational idea to buy discount products.
Those people who make the former choice believe they can save themselves a lot of money by buying cut-price products.In addition,they can use less money to buy more products.However,still others do not agree this.In their opinions,the discount is merely a business means of attracting customers and enhancing their desires for purchase.Besides,they argue that the discount always tempts customers to buy something unnecessary.
As to me,I tend to refuse to buy cut-price products.For one thing,complaints about cut-price products rank first in recent days according to the newspapers.For another,cut-price products are usually not provided with an after-sales service,such as three guarantees for products.Considering these,we may reasonably conclude that customers should think carefully when they buy cut-price products.