备战专升本考试:你可能已经闯入了写作的误区
你是如何对待英语写作的呢?有没有在写作中会经常在同一个问题上犯迷糊,那么今天,我们就一起来解析一下那些我们经常容易犯错的知识点吧,要知道这些就是我们写作时的误区。
一、累赘(Redundancy)
言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如:
In spite of the fact that he is lazy,I like him.
本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句,我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”可以改为:In spite of his laziness,I like him.
例1.For the people who are diligent and kind,money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
剖析:整个句子可以大大简化。
改为:Diligent,caring people use money only to buy what they need.
二、不连贯(Incoherence)
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。
例1.The fresh water,it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析:The fresh water与逗号后的it不连贯。It与things在数方面不一致。
改为:Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
三、综合性语言错误(Comprehensive Misusage)
所谓“综合性语言错误”,是指除了上述十种错误以外,还有诸如时态,语态,标点符号,大小写等方面的错误。
例1.Today,Money to everybody is very importance,our's eat,cloth,live,go etc.
一、累赘(Redundancy)
言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如:
In spite of the fact that he is lazy,I like him.
本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句,我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”可以改为:In spite of his laziness,I like him.
例1.For the people who are diligent and kind,money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
剖析:整个句子可以大大简化。
改为:Diligent,caring people use money only to buy what they need.
二、不连贯(Incoherence)
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。
例1.The fresh water,it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析:The fresh water与逗号后的it不连贯。It与things在数方面不一致。
改为:Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
三、综合性语言错误(Comprehensive Misusage)
所谓“综合性语言错误”,是指除了上述十种错误以外,还有诸如时态,语态,标点符号,大小写等方面的错误。
例1.Today,Money to everybody is very importance,our's eat,cloth,live,go etc.
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