论文写作指导:采访类英语写作指导
采访类的文章通常是针对某件事或某种现象而提出相应的措施和解决方法。
写作时,第一句开门见山地交待采访的基本情况,即阐述采访的时间、对象、主题等,接着便阐述采访情况或被访人所述的相关信息等。最后陈述被访人提出的个人观点或对解决该问题的建议。
一、常用套语
1. 交待采访的时间、对象和主题。
(1)Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, concerning/about the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China. 上周末,我就中国学生的近视问题采访了眼科医生王教授。(2009年广东)
2. 罗列采访对象所述相关信息。
(1)According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are shortsighted,ranking the first in the world. 据王教授所说, 我国略多于一半的学生都是近视, 居世界第一位。(2009年广东)
(2)He also pointed out that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness. 他还指出说,导致近视的原因很复杂,没有药物能治愈近视。(2009年广东)
3.陈述专家的个人观点或建议。
He suggested that school children avoid overuse of thEir eyes and do more outdoor activities. 他建议学生避免过度使用眼睛,多做户外活动。(2009年广东)
He particularly reminded us that how to hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness. 他特别地提醒我们如何握笔也和近视有关。(2009年广东)
二、实例分析(2011深圳一模)
你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况。
时间:上周星期三
对象:王老师
主题:中学生英语单词拼写的问题
基本信息:
(1)约54%高中同学英语书法很差;
(2)约45%的英语词汇只会说而不会写。
老师解读:
原因:考试未设拼写题型;平时训练不够;学生懒于记忆。
建议:提高认识,引起重视;加强训练,掌握方法。
[写作内容]
根据以上情况用英语写一篇采访报道,包括如下内容:
1. 采访的时间、对象和主题;
2. 中学生英语单词拼写的现状;
3. 老师解读。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
[解题指导]
首先,用一句话介绍该访问的时间、主题以及对象,并以这句话作为文章的开头句,达到开门见山,点明主题的作用。
Last Wednesday, I had an interview with Mr Wang, an English teacher, concerning the issue of English word spelling among middle school students.
其次,用三句话分别谈谈采访中几个信息点的内容以及信息中所反映的问题。
According to Mr Wang, the English handwriting of slightly more than half of the senior middle school student is very poor, and about 45% of them can not spell words correctly although they are able to speak.
He also pointed out that the causes of spelling problems are that there are no specific word spelling checks in exams, and there is no enough training.
The students are too lazy to memorize words.
最后,用一句话简单介绍专家给我们提出的希望和建议。
He suggested that we should raise the awareness and place great emphasis on that, and above all, that we should master skills while we are training ourselves.
[参考范文]
Last Wednesday, I had an interview with Mr Wang, an English teacher, concerning the issue of English word spelling among middle school students. According to Mr Wang, slightly more than half of the senior middle school students' English handwriting is very poor and about 45% of them can not spell words correctly although they are able to speak. He also pointed out that the causes for spelling problems are that there are no specific word spelling checks in exams, and there is no enough training. Worse still, the students are too lazy to memorize words. He suggested that we should raise the awareness and place great emphasis on that, and above all, that we should master skills while we are training ourselves.
三、原创练习
你是当地报社小记者,上周进行了一次采访,以下是这次采访的情况:
对象:杨教授
主题:中学生网络成瘾问题
基本内容:
(1)据统计,我国网民已经上升到3.38亿,其中学生的比例占到25%,大部分的上网学生都在玩游戏。
(2)网络成瘾造成缺少睡眠,直接地影响学生的身体健康和学习。
专家建议:减轻负担,减少压力,丰富活动,营造温馨家庭气氛。
【写作内容】
根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,包括如下内容:
1. 采访时间,对象和主题;
2. 中学生上网成瘾的现状;
3. 专家的建议。
【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】
句子结构完整,信息内容准确,篇章结构连贯。
[参考范文] (One possible version)
Last week, I had an interview with Professor Yang about the Middle School Students' addiction to the Internet. According to the statistics, the Internet-users in our country has increased to 338 million, and 25% of them are middle school students, most of whom are playing computer games while surfing the Internet. Internet addiction will certainly cause them lack of sleep and will have a bad influence on their health and studies. He suggested that schools should try not only to reduce students' heavy burden and relieve their stress, but also enrich their after-class activities. He also pointed out that it is useful to improve the relationship between teachers and students and create a warm and harmonious atmosphere in schools and families.
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