论文写作指导：例谈说明文的写作

 必修六第五单元的写作是descriptive wrting，也就是说明文的写作，要求以Have you ever thought of visiting_______? You should because it has special attractions. 开头，对你喜欢的景点进行以下描述： 
　　1. Why the place is famous? 
　　2. What you can do there? 
　　3. How good it is for you? 
　　下面请看以下两位同学的习作： 
　　习作一 
　　Sheng Nongjia 
　　Have you ever thought of visiting Shen nongjia? You should because it has special attractions. 
　　Shengnongjia is a forest district.① It lies in the northwest of HubEi Province, covering an area of 3,253 square kilometers. Such a vast area is heavily forested of trees, like fir, pine and hemlock, and also inhabited by many precious animals, like golden monkey, leopard and bear. So it is a wonder tourist attraction, if you want to get close to nature. 
　　Shennongjia is well known for its legend of savages. ③There are some reports showing evidence for them, like their hair and footprints, but there is no one who really has witnessed a savage in the last 30 years. 
　　②The area has many mountains, with an average altitude of 1,700 meters. Because of that, the weather varies from the low places to the high places. The best time for visitors is from June to October. ④But if you go there between December and the next February, you can enjoy the fantastic snow scenery. 
　　Finally, let's talk about the food there. There are many kinds of special dishes that you won't have in other places, especially its edible wild herbs. That's really a feast for you! （夏秀）