论文写作指导：专练二十六短文写作(一)

来源： 2017-10-07 23:50中

【训练题一】
　　假设你是李华, 一位17岁的女孩, 英语成绩非常突出, 有两年英语家教的经验, 现在是学校"爱心俱乐部"的成员，认为志愿者工作能够使人树立信心，培养良好的交际技能。看到下面的招聘信息，你愿意利用这次机会，为需要帮助的儿童献出自己的微薄之力，同时增长见识，了解社会。
　　A Voluntary Activity
　　In the winter vacation
　　5 Volunteers WANTED
　　as English teacher
　　At S.O.S. Children's Village
　　Those who are interested in taking part in the activity, please send an email to studentunion@bjsz.cn before Apr. 25, 2011, explaining your past experiences and purposes for applying.
　　 Students' Union
　　请根据所给的中、英文提示完成下面的英文邮件。
　　注意：1. 词数120左右;
　　 2. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好;
　　 3. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯.
　　参考词汇：tutor家教 Loving Heart Club爱心俱乐部
　　
　　【思路点拨】
　　本文要求写一封电子邮件，其开头和结尾已经给出，内容是向学生会提出申请，在寒假当一名志愿英语教师。其内容非常贴近学生生活，题目表述清晰，要求明确，体裁为书信。要写好这类文章，同学们要有较强的语言表达能力，能较好地展示自己的优势和对申请工作的热爱。
　　第一步：审题。体裁为书信；人称用第一人称；时态以一般现在时为主。
　　第二步：提炼要点。写信的目的；自我介绍，要恰到好处地展示自己的才能和优势；申请该工作的意义。
　　第三步：遣词造句。注意使用过渡词或句子，一定要使文章内容紧凑，语言连贯流畅。
　　最后，复查文章的时态呼应、人称、主谓一致性、字母大小写、词汇拼写、句子结构、连接词和内容要点是否齐全。
　　
　　【参考范文】
　　Dear Students' Union,
　　I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and I'm eager to become one of the Volunteer English teachers.
　　I'm Li Hua, a girl of 17, and I have a good command of English. For two years I have been tutoring two primary school kids in English. Presently I work as a member of Loving Heart Club in our school. Voluntary work has helped me build confidence and good communication skills.
　　In my opinion, bEing a volunteer teacher is obviously more than just teaching, furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizon and promote our understanding of the world. Meanwhile, I can make the most of my special talents and interests. Only by helping those kids can I make a big difference to their future and make contributions to society.
　　I'd greatly appreciate it if you could possibly consider my application. I'm looking forward to your early reply and please email me at lihua@yahoo.com.cn.
　　 Yours sincerely
　　 Li Hua