2020天津公安消防考军校考试-写作部分（三）

三.“拼合模块”(Joining) 。这是写作进入实战的阶段。拿到一个考试写作题，要分析每段的功能，进行一些添加或改动，最后拼合。

例题讲解：

1)“统考用书”模拟试题1的写作题(红色为模块中有的句子，黑色为改动或新加进的句子)：

1. 了解对方毕业后的情况

2. 你的近况

3. 邀请对方方便时来访

第1段是一种询问，到“询问B”中找元素：

How is everything going on with you? Are you still working with Microsoft China? Give me more information about your work and family since graduation. We all are concerned about you.

第2段是"介绍”，从 A去找元素：

I am doing well recently with my graduate studies. I have just passed my English test and now I am preparing for an upcoming computer test due next Monday. I don’t worry about the test because I have spent two weeks reviewing my lessons.

第3段是邀请，肯定从“邀请C”中找元素：

Former classmates here are very pleased to invite you to visit us when it is convenient to you. We can have a driving trip to a country resort about 90 km away from our city. It is a scenic place with a vast lake and pine-covered hills.

现在来拼合前面的板块成为一篇短文：

How is everything going on with you? Are you still working with Microsoft China? Give me more information about your work and family since graduation. We all are concerned about you.

I am doing well recently with my graduate studies. I have just passed my English test and now I am preparing for an upcoming computer test due next Monday. I don’t worry about the test because I have spent two weeks reviewing my lessons.

Former classmates here are very pleased to invite you to visit us when it is convenient to you. We can have a driving trip to a country resort about 90 km away from our city. It is a scenic place with a vast lake and pine-covered hills. (123 字)

2)“统考用书”模拟试题六(Test 6，稍作改动)中的写作题：

1.告诉对方你将参加计算机考试

2.询问对方任何做准备

3.请对方建议一些参考书

经过分析，发现第1段是一种“告知”，在“介绍”中有相关句式和信息，拿过来稍加改动后使用：

I have just passed my English test and now I am preparing for an upcoming computer test due next Monday. I worry a little bit about the test because I have spent little time reviewing my lessons.

第2段是一种询问，在“模块B”中能找到有用的句子：

Did you take the test of “Computer ABC” instructed by Professor Zhang Hai? I will be very grateful if you can give me some advice on how to prepare for the test.. I am going to take it next Tuesday and so I need your help.

第3段是一种要求，在“要求”F 中能找到有用的句式：

I will appreciate it if you recommend some reference books, especially those on how to deal with computer operational systems. Please write back to tell me your ideas ASAP.

现在来看最后拼出来的短文：

I have just passed my English test and now I am preparing for an upcoming computer test. I worry a little bit about the test because I have spent little time reviewing my lessons.

Did you take the test of “Computer ABC” instructed by Professor Zhang Hai? I will be very grateful if you can give me some advice on how to prepare for the test. I am going to take it next Tuesday and so I need your help.

I will appreciate it if you recommend some reference books, especially those on how to deal with computer components. Please write back to tell me your ideas ASAP. (108 字)

3)“统考用书”模拟试题2(Test 2)：

1.告诉对方你最近将出去旅游

2.了解对方旅游所在地的景点

3.请对方给与帮忙安排

经过分析，发现第1段是一种“告知”，在“邀请”模块中有旅游的相关内容，拿过来再加一些内容就可以了：

We are prepared to have a driving trip to a country resort about 90 km away from our city this coming New Year’s Day holiday. We plan to stay there for two days.

第2段是一种“要求”，可以在F模块中找一点有用的元素：

Since we want to get more information about the specific tourist spots at the country resort, Would you please give us some ideas what else tourist spots we can visit in the place?

第3段 也是“要求”，可以套用上面D.(致谢)的一些句型：

My wife and I will appreciate it if you give us some assistance, especially in looking for a nice but inexpensive hotel. Please reserve a three-star hotel room for us.

经过拼合，成了一篇短文：

We are prepared to have a driving trip to a country resort about 90 km away from our city this coming New Year’s Day holiday. We plan to stay there for two days.

Since we want to get more information about the specific tourist spots at the country resort, Would you please give us some ideas what else tourist spots we can visit in the place?

My wife and I will appreciate it if you give us some assistance, especially in looking for a nice but inexpensive hotel. Please reserve a three-star hotel room for us. (97 字)